Non Fiction Evaluation

Looking back on the non fiction work I’m both pleased and disappointed. Both stories were on the boring side but I’m glad I changed it to be more of  phone advertisement rather then the 2 men eating dinner together. It made it more believable and it was more non fiction than fiction.

I did begin to colour the original piece but that was before I decided to change it to be more believable and changing it set me back but it was for the best. I needed to do a non fiction animation and the original was more fiction.

Dinner time Story board (updated)

I spoke earlier about wanting to change the dinner time plot and instead of it being the 2 men having dinner it will be them realising they have the same brand phone and talking about it.